Pyaar...
( I am posting one of adi's comments here... )
adi said...
pyaar...
chote se ek akshar mein kho di poori zindagi maine,
"ek din yun hi hua mann
pyaar kya hai, chalo jaane hum
nikal pade ghar se
jahan bhi le gaye kadam
pyaar mila bhi aur nahi bhi, yeh to pata nahi
par mil gaye bahut saare gum"
aaj sirf woh gum hai, pyar nahi...
aaj sirf woh hain, hum nahi
pyaar...
chote se ek akshar mein kho di poori zindagi maine,
chote se ek akshar mein pa li poori bandagi maine
3/24/2006 7:44 AM
I appreciate ur thoughts... may be i think different from u for this.... n here it is...
pyaar...
ek chhote se shabd mein jee li poori zindagi maine,
ek din yun hi
pyaar ne aakaar thama daaman
bahut khush tha yeh mann,
socha yehi woh lamhe hain
jinka intezaar tha
na maloom tha woh pyaar hi tha
pyaar be humein kuch is kadar chhua
ghamon se phir saamna na hua...
woh kareeb nahi, sirf pyaar hai
woh saath nahi, sirf yaad hai....
pyaar...
ek chhote se shabd mein jee li poori zindagi maine,
ek chhote se safar mein paa li ek manzil maine....
( i hope that u didn't mind my doing that... copying n changing this... if u did, pls let me know, i didnt intend to hurt u adi... i ll erase this ....)
adi said...
pyaar...
chote se ek akshar mein kho di poori zindagi maine,
"ek din yun hi hua mann
pyaar kya hai, chalo jaane hum
nikal pade ghar se
jahan bhi le gaye kadam
pyaar mila bhi aur nahi bhi, yeh to pata nahi
par mil gaye bahut saare gum"
aaj sirf woh gum hai, pyar nahi...
aaj sirf woh hain, hum nahi
pyaar...
chote se ek akshar mein kho di poori zindagi maine,
chote se ek akshar mein pa li poori bandagi maine
3/24/2006 7:44 AM
I appreciate ur thoughts... may be i think different from u for this.... n here it is...
pyaar...
ek chhote se shabd mein jee li poori zindagi maine,
ek din yun hi
pyaar ne aakaar thama daaman
bahut khush tha yeh mann,
socha yehi woh lamhe hain
jinka intezaar tha
na maloom tha woh pyaar hi tha
pyaar be humein kuch is kadar chhua
ghamon se phir saamna na hua...
woh kareeb nahi, sirf pyaar hai
woh saath nahi, sirf yaad hai....
pyaar...
ek chhote se shabd mein jee li poori zindagi maine,
ek chhote se safar mein paa li ek manzil maine....
( i hope that u didn't mind my doing that... copying n changing this... if u did, pls let me know, i didnt intend to hurt u adi... i ll erase this ....)
posted by meet_me at
3/24/2006 10:48:00 AM
4 Comments:
wen did adi write that?
well i dunno abt adi but u adapted it beautifully
ab mujhe lagne laga hai
ki jo kavitayen humne likhi hai raddi mein bech de :(
but pyar...
zindagi to jee lee hai humne bhi
ab us neend ka intezaar hai
jo pyar hote hi kahin gum ho gaya thha....
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Aparna Mudi, at 3/24/2006 12:55 PM
Hi shadows, check my post just below this one.. he has commented there...
n abt ur writing, hey u do a wonderful job...n i ve been impressed by the way u write... it is amazing really...
n yes, i ll like to take this as a compliment for me.. :) ..i hope that is wt it ws meant for haina?
By
meet_me, at 3/24/2006 7:48 PM
well obviusly pheebes..it was meant for u but i guess adi felt bad he said "i suppose the comment page has become a complimenting platform for two women....
By
Aparna Mudi, at 3/25/2006 3:10 AM
oye hagrid,
i'll put ya up in a hot potion stew and put some spells upon ya!
just a student in hogwarts, m i not supposed to make some noise;)
By
delhidreams, at 3/25/2006 7:48 AM
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